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I closed the door,
Pressed my back on it
"Oh! You came!"
"Of course I did!
I couldn`t turn down
A request from you!"
he replied, with a smile.

A blush coloured my face.
He came towards me,
A question in his eyes.
I opened my mouth
To answer, but
My response came
In the form of a
Fall.

I braced for the impact.
But it was softer than
I thought. My clumsiness
Was a horrible ruse to
Get closer to him.

Holding me close, worry
Replaced his question,
But I hid my face
In his aura before I
Could answer.

"You`re so warm. I
Never thought you
Obnoxious types were."
His reply was caught
In his throat, between
A thanks and a retort.

I silenced him with a finger
Touch, "I can now tell you
Everything." He fell silent,
His expression queried.

"I love you."

That single phrase was
All it took, to stun him
Into silence. I took the
Chance, to run and escape
His breathless response.

"I love you too."

My soul fluttered while
My body shuddered at
The words I thought I`d
Never hear.

He held me to his
Chest, cradled my face
And grinned his cheeky
Grin. And then he came
Close.

He kissed me.

"I have always loved you."

Were his words before I
Knew it. The only words
He spoke deep into
The night.

The night we became one.
Ah, Jaden Yuki...people hate you, but your charm just seizes me for some reason, Mr. Absolutely Flawless.

This has got to be the shortest oneshot I have ever made...>_<

I`ll let the mature content thing slide this time, but it definitely infers sex, so BEWARE. *nosebleed*

If you happen to be a fangirl, feel free to put yourself as the first person in the poem! ^_^

Think I may post this on Quizilla as a 2nd pov...

Poem is copyright to Axe-lTheSystem.
Jaden Yuki copyright to...whoever made him...
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:icondjthehedgehog1:
DJthehedgehog1 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow......... i feel like i can feel the universe around me...... holy shit its like im high....... cooolll............ Wait wat. wats going on. wat. ._.
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:iconaxe-lthesystem:
Axe-lTheSystem Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...? Huh?
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:icondjthehedgehog1:
DJthehedgehog1 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I... i dont know...
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:iconaxe-lthesystem:
Axe-lTheSystem Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Uh...OK? XD
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:icondjthehedgehog1:
DJthehedgehog1 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lol =3
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:iconask-linny:
Ask-Linny Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013
 Great poem!
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:iconaxe-lthesystem:
Axe-lTheSystem Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, thank you very much! ^_^
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:iconask-linny:
Ask-Linny Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
you're welcome
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hungary4hetalia Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
YUKI! i loves!
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:iconaxe-lthesystem:
Axe-lTheSystem Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay! Thanks!
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